Koa ora, and welcome back
this week we have been looking out pervasive writing so are create this week was to make a persuasive argument so the topic I chose was save the animals and stop littering
So here is my persuasive argument...
Save the animals and stop littering
Stop littering!!!!!
Who loves animals? Well what if I told you there was a way that you could help the animals from getting killed . All you would need to do is take an extra minute or two to put your rubbish in the bin.
Instead of just putting rubbish on the floor you should actually stop and think about how this affects the environment. For example plastic litter, plastic litter is one of the most common killers of animals, but particularly marine animals. Each year over 100,000 dolphins, fish, whales, turtles, and more drown after becoming tangled in or digesting plastic litter. Even just picking up someone else's litter can make a big difference in the world . So after looking at what this really does to the animals will you stop littering?
Hi Jules, that’s a great piece of persuasive writing. You hooked me in with a rhetorical question at the beginning, and could back up your statements with facts. You are right in that it doesn’t take much of an effort to pop your rubbish (or someone else’s) into the bin. It makes our environment tidy, plus eliminates any animals getting harmed too. We all love dolphins don’t we?
ReplyDeleteHi how are you?,
Deletethank you for the lovely comment and yes I do love dolphins.
-Jules